Post by chaogal on Dec 22, 2005 14:38:23 GMT -5
Part 1
There i was. In the middle of a fight with two dark chao. Even though im a hero chao, im pretty tough. I ran at one of the dark chao grabbing his pitchfork pointing it at him. The other chao was behind me ready to strike me with his pitchfork, which i already knew. It was all part of the plan. I was pretending to act like i was going to attack the other dark chao which i had taken the pitchfork from. Just as the dark chao behind me was about to strike, i zipped around,and grabbed his pichfork to. I knocked them both to the ground with a spin kick. They fled back to the dark garden. I turned to the hero garden heading back, from the fight in the chao lobby. When i noticed a strange light coming from just above the chao garden. I was caught in a trance of the phenomeonon. I stared aimlessly at the thing. Whatever it was. The light stopped , and i noticed it was another garden! I looked up. Amazed. This was like my own garden. I flew up into it, not caring what dangers it could hold. I was in a fantastic garden with a strange red grass, and trees, with red, orange, and yellow leaves. The trees beared nuts so delicious, you couldnt describe the scrumptious taste. It was like Fall all the time here. The weather was cool, and a slight breeze slithered across the grass. This garden was the best thing that ever happened to me. I had my own garden, i discovered it. Im finally the one who found something great. Not my brother. Not my Friends. Me. I was filled with estatic and pleasure. It was far bigger than any other garden. I ran around not caring what i ran into. Until i bumped into something hard. I fell to the ground with a thud. It was an egg i had bumped into. YES!!! i discovered something again! a baby chao egg!
Part 2
The egg lay in my lap. I tried nuzzling it, but it didnt work out well. Nuzzling is a little hard for a chao. I knew i couldnt leave the garden without telling anyone. The Dark chao would discover it for sure. I had to tell the Angel Chao, one way, or the other. If the Dark chao saw me just sitting in the Garden, They would get loads of gaurds in the garden to come attack me. Doing this wasnt going to help anything. I had to tell her, though, ive never been to her throne before. I had the courage. I thought to myself. I couldnt just leave the egg there. The dark chao would find it for sure. It was to heavy to bring to the Hero garden. I was confused. I had to leave. The Dark chao could discover the garden any second. I had to think up a name real fast. A name for the garden. I named it, The Great Garden.
I finally came up with a decision. I was going to have to pull the egg to the Hero garden somehow. I guess i would just drag it. Thats exactly what i did. Stupid me. I shouldve just waited for it to hatch, so i didnt have to carry the egg, too. I was climbing the first few steps to the Hero garden, already practically paralized. I barlely managed to get it up into the garden. I finally sat it down, in relief. My friends rushed over to me. "You had an egg?!" "NO! I found it." "How on earth did you find the egg?!" "I discovered a new garden! But i dont have time to talk about it now. Ive got to tell the Angel chao!" I told my friends to keep the egg safe until i came back. I hurried to the throne, with chills running down my spine. "Ummmmm.... mam?" "What is it, my dear hero chao?" "Well i discovered a new garden, and an egg in it." "Oh my gosh! You must show me this garden!" "i brang the egg back to the Hero garden though." "Its fine! You must show me though!" i led the way to the Great Garden. But when we got there, there was already 3 dark chao in it.
Part 3
"Get out of this Garden now! she discovered it!" Shouted the Angel chao. The dark chao fled. "Wooses."
"What are we going to do, since the Dark chao discovred it? You know they're going to tell the Devil chao." i saw a worried look on the Angel chao's face. She glanced at me, and looked back into the distance. The Angel chao finally replied; "For once......... I dont know" I saw shame fall upon her. "Its ok! Its not your fault!" She suddenly stuck her head up high. "Dark chao.... I sense Dark chao.... Tons of them.... We gotta get outta here!" It was to late. The garden was already surrounded by Dark chao. Including the Devil chao. The Devil chao swooped his mighty wings right in front of the Angel chao. "So, your little friend here discovered the Garden, huh? Whats it called?" Frightened, i replied; "Th-th-th- the Gr-great garden, sir." "So i see i will be taking the Garden away from you, but i will keep the name of it." "No! Please, no!" "Yes! I will keep it, and rule all of you!" "give it to her!" Said the Angel chao. "No! You wanna fight for it?" The Angel chao replied; "Bring it on."
Part 4
"The Hero chao have declared war!" The Devil chao shouted. The Dark chao ran at me first. Being the easiest target. I had no idea what to do. I flew in the air, with all the other Dark chao flying after me. I flew faster then them, thank god. Thats when i remembered, i wasnt the easiest target! I was at level 99 in everything, the angel chao wasnt! I finally flew to the ground. The Dark chao gave me evil looks in the eye. I finally ran at my first few challengers. i knocked them to the ground, with ease. They got back up with bruises on their face. I stood there, pretending i wasnt paying attention. They ran at me and just as they were about to jump kick me. Then a whole Dark chao mob was after me. i ran for it. I was running, and running, and running. I suddenly find myslef, face to face with the Devil chao.
Part 5
I gasped in horror. Ive never been face to face with the devil chao. I didnt know how strong he was, nor how weak. I tried to make a break for it, but the devil chao jerked me back. He grasped my throat, tightly. I gasped for breath. "Surrender the Great Garden, now, or i kill her!" i saw defeat come upon her, as my vision turned blue. I was seeing blue! I needed air fast. She came out of her trance when she heard me coughing for air. "I surrender!" She shouted. The devil chao finally loosened his grip. he looked at me and smirked. "I didnt say i was going to give her back to you!" "Give her back now!" He tightned his grip again. She looked down and said; "o...k........" He flew me off. I wonder where he would take me..........
Part 6
I was high in the air. Almost as high of altitudes i could barely breathe. I guess he kinda forgot that i...... WAS A MORTAL!!!!!!! HE IS IMMORTAL! IM NOT!!!!!! sorry about the blow up. Anyways, he flew me to a gigantic fortress, it was huge! I fianally was able to breathe as we approached the ground. We were finally at the entrance. I looked up at the massive castle. It was even bigger than when i saw it from the air. The Devil chao went inside the castle, ordering the gaurds to take me to the dungeon. They handcuffed me and lead me to a cage. There were many other hero chao in the dungeon. Some of them were the missing chao, all over the hero garden. I recognized them. There, in the corner of my eye I spotted my best fried, lost 2 years ago. "Lunar!" I shouted. "2cute!" she shouted. (thats my name) We hugged each other, happy to see each other after 2 years apart. I told her about the Great Garden and how i got here. She looked at me in shock.
We then began talking about the good ol' times, and how we always did things together. All our problems faded away. From this point on, we'd be together forever.
Part 7
This was it. We had just managed to escape the dungeon. We rounded up all of the other hero chao. We sneak around many corners, and walls. Lunar decided to go take a round trip, straight to the devil chao. The idea, made all the other hero chao exchange worried glances. So did i. getting pratically choked to death by him, wasnt a good first meet. We were only one step away from the Devil chao's throne room. We finally ran in and began attacking him. There were at least 20 of us, so we had a good advantage. Some gaurds came charging at us. "I'll take care of them." I said. The Devil chao was coughing, and screaming for help. Lunar grabbed his throat and choked him, til his eye sight turned blue, just to see how it felt. A strong smell of courage filled the air. The Devil chao was being choked by all of the hero chao now. he was probably seeing purple, by now! Ha ha! The gaurds came to get them off of the Devil chao. I spin kicked them all, and they flew in every direction. Finally the devil chao said in a sqeaky voice from not being able to breathe, " I surrender!" We let go of his throat. He finally comitted the Garden back to me, saying, " It will be mine someday!" "Ya, Right!" I sad. me and the Hero chao escaped from The Dark garden back to the Hero garden. We came back and told the Angel chao, " We Won! The war is over! We did it!" All the missing chao were reunited with there families. And as for me, lets just put it this way, I HOPE i live happily ever after!
THE END
check out book 2 of the great garden, its called,
The Devil Chao's Revenge (coming soon)
;D
There i was. In the middle of a fight with two dark chao. Even though im a hero chao, im pretty tough. I ran at one of the dark chao grabbing his pitchfork pointing it at him. The other chao was behind me ready to strike me with his pitchfork, which i already knew. It was all part of the plan. I was pretending to act like i was going to attack the other dark chao which i had taken the pitchfork from. Just as the dark chao behind me was about to strike, i zipped around,and grabbed his pichfork to. I knocked them both to the ground with a spin kick. They fled back to the dark garden. I turned to the hero garden heading back, from the fight in the chao lobby. When i noticed a strange light coming from just above the chao garden. I was caught in a trance of the phenomeonon. I stared aimlessly at the thing. Whatever it was. The light stopped , and i noticed it was another garden! I looked up. Amazed. This was like my own garden. I flew up into it, not caring what dangers it could hold. I was in a fantastic garden with a strange red grass, and trees, with red, orange, and yellow leaves. The trees beared nuts so delicious, you couldnt describe the scrumptious taste. It was like Fall all the time here. The weather was cool, and a slight breeze slithered across the grass. This garden was the best thing that ever happened to me. I had my own garden, i discovered it. Im finally the one who found something great. Not my brother. Not my Friends. Me. I was filled with estatic and pleasure. It was far bigger than any other garden. I ran around not caring what i ran into. Until i bumped into something hard. I fell to the ground with a thud. It was an egg i had bumped into. YES!!! i discovered something again! a baby chao egg!
Part 2
The egg lay in my lap. I tried nuzzling it, but it didnt work out well. Nuzzling is a little hard for a chao. I knew i couldnt leave the garden without telling anyone. The Dark chao would discover it for sure. I had to tell the Angel Chao, one way, or the other. If the Dark chao saw me just sitting in the Garden, They would get loads of gaurds in the garden to come attack me. Doing this wasnt going to help anything. I had to tell her, though, ive never been to her throne before. I had the courage. I thought to myself. I couldnt just leave the egg there. The dark chao would find it for sure. It was to heavy to bring to the Hero garden. I was confused. I had to leave. The Dark chao could discover the garden any second. I had to think up a name real fast. A name for the garden. I named it, The Great Garden.
I finally came up with a decision. I was going to have to pull the egg to the Hero garden somehow. I guess i would just drag it. Thats exactly what i did. Stupid me. I shouldve just waited for it to hatch, so i didnt have to carry the egg, too. I was climbing the first few steps to the Hero garden, already practically paralized. I barlely managed to get it up into the garden. I finally sat it down, in relief. My friends rushed over to me. "You had an egg?!" "NO! I found it." "How on earth did you find the egg?!" "I discovered a new garden! But i dont have time to talk about it now. Ive got to tell the Angel chao!" I told my friends to keep the egg safe until i came back. I hurried to the throne, with chills running down my spine. "Ummmmm.... mam?" "What is it, my dear hero chao?" "Well i discovered a new garden, and an egg in it." "Oh my gosh! You must show me this garden!" "i brang the egg back to the Hero garden though." "Its fine! You must show me though!" i led the way to the Great Garden. But when we got there, there was already 3 dark chao in it.
Part 3
"Get out of this Garden now! she discovered it!" Shouted the Angel chao. The dark chao fled. "Wooses."
"What are we going to do, since the Dark chao discovred it? You know they're going to tell the Devil chao." i saw a worried look on the Angel chao's face. She glanced at me, and looked back into the distance. The Angel chao finally replied; "For once......... I dont know" I saw shame fall upon her. "Its ok! Its not your fault!" She suddenly stuck her head up high. "Dark chao.... I sense Dark chao.... Tons of them.... We gotta get outta here!" It was to late. The garden was already surrounded by Dark chao. Including the Devil chao. The Devil chao swooped his mighty wings right in front of the Angel chao. "So, your little friend here discovered the Garden, huh? Whats it called?" Frightened, i replied; "Th-th-th- the Gr-great garden, sir." "So i see i will be taking the Garden away from you, but i will keep the name of it." "No! Please, no!" "Yes! I will keep it, and rule all of you!" "give it to her!" Said the Angel chao. "No! You wanna fight for it?" The Angel chao replied; "Bring it on."
Part 4
"The Hero chao have declared war!" The Devil chao shouted. The Dark chao ran at me first. Being the easiest target. I had no idea what to do. I flew in the air, with all the other Dark chao flying after me. I flew faster then them, thank god. Thats when i remembered, i wasnt the easiest target! I was at level 99 in everything, the angel chao wasnt! I finally flew to the ground. The Dark chao gave me evil looks in the eye. I finally ran at my first few challengers. i knocked them to the ground, with ease. They got back up with bruises on their face. I stood there, pretending i wasnt paying attention. They ran at me and just as they were about to jump kick me. Then a whole Dark chao mob was after me. i ran for it. I was running, and running, and running. I suddenly find myslef, face to face with the Devil chao.
Part 5
I gasped in horror. Ive never been face to face with the devil chao. I didnt know how strong he was, nor how weak. I tried to make a break for it, but the devil chao jerked me back. He grasped my throat, tightly. I gasped for breath. "Surrender the Great Garden, now, or i kill her!" i saw defeat come upon her, as my vision turned blue. I was seeing blue! I needed air fast. She came out of her trance when she heard me coughing for air. "I surrender!" She shouted. The devil chao finally loosened his grip. he looked at me and smirked. "I didnt say i was going to give her back to you!" "Give her back now!" He tightned his grip again. She looked down and said; "o...k........" He flew me off. I wonder where he would take me..........
Part 6
I was high in the air. Almost as high of altitudes i could barely breathe. I guess he kinda forgot that i...... WAS A MORTAL!!!!!!! HE IS IMMORTAL! IM NOT!!!!!! sorry about the blow up. Anyways, he flew me to a gigantic fortress, it was huge! I fianally was able to breathe as we approached the ground. We were finally at the entrance. I looked up at the massive castle. It was even bigger than when i saw it from the air. The Devil chao went inside the castle, ordering the gaurds to take me to the dungeon. They handcuffed me and lead me to a cage. There were many other hero chao in the dungeon. Some of them were the missing chao, all over the hero garden. I recognized them. There, in the corner of my eye I spotted my best fried, lost 2 years ago. "Lunar!" I shouted. "2cute!" she shouted. (thats my name) We hugged each other, happy to see each other after 2 years apart. I told her about the Great Garden and how i got here. She looked at me in shock.
We then began talking about the good ol' times, and how we always did things together. All our problems faded away. From this point on, we'd be together forever.
Part 7
This was it. We had just managed to escape the dungeon. We rounded up all of the other hero chao. We sneak around many corners, and walls. Lunar decided to go take a round trip, straight to the devil chao. The idea, made all the other hero chao exchange worried glances. So did i. getting pratically choked to death by him, wasnt a good first meet. We were only one step away from the Devil chao's throne room. We finally ran in and began attacking him. There were at least 20 of us, so we had a good advantage. Some gaurds came charging at us. "I'll take care of them." I said. The Devil chao was coughing, and screaming for help. Lunar grabbed his throat and choked him, til his eye sight turned blue, just to see how it felt. A strong smell of courage filled the air. The Devil chao was being choked by all of the hero chao now. he was probably seeing purple, by now! Ha ha! The gaurds came to get them off of the Devil chao. I spin kicked them all, and they flew in every direction. Finally the devil chao said in a sqeaky voice from not being able to breathe, " I surrender!" We let go of his throat. He finally comitted the Garden back to me, saying, " It will be mine someday!" "Ya, Right!" I sad. me and the Hero chao escaped from The Dark garden back to the Hero garden. We came back and told the Angel chao, " We Won! The war is over! We did it!" All the missing chao were reunited with there families. And as for me, lets just put it this way, I HOPE i live happily ever after!
THE END
check out book 2 of the great garden, its called,
The Devil Chao's Revenge (coming soon)
;D